Wednesday, 11 November 2009
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alice, is it you?
look through the
glass alice look
at the pretty
leaves falling
down and sitting
there like they
have nothing to
do.
look at the way
he steps on them
all alice the way
he smiles and
just jumps on
them like there
are no limitations
in life.
you know different
alice yes you are
a good girl who
would never ever
in her life smile
and laugh to
herself like a crazy
person no you
would normally
step over the
crunchy leaves
now wouldn't
you?
wait alice wait is
that you out there
too laughing and
smiling and jumping
on those poor leaves
is it you who has
broken out of your
orderly life for one
of laughter and
sweaty smiles is it
you who is now
touching his face
and smiling softly
is it you alice or am
i seeing something
different through the
looking glass?
[ © ; a d r i a n ]
alice, please, stop kidding yourself. he would never fall for a girl like you.
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Comments (10)
looks like writers block was cured? :D
@alltimelow22 - for the moment. XDD
Wow. Your writing continues to take my breath away.
@the_mamarazzi - i'm gladd. i need to leave people breathless; they can't continue to use my air! lol, jokes. :DD thankss. :]
@Starry_Liz - lol ;) Yes, I HAVE noticed that is becoming a problem. And they say pollution is causing global warming... !
Nice piece. I love the full title of this.
@eve1684 - thankyou. :DD
Well done :) You are a great talent.
Amazing. *looks through the rest of your posts* (:
@undertheglass - thankyou.
@Manstration - merci. :P